From 0ffbd67d36a8f6229f25c8eeb7366ad4cbeb66d7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Patrick Mulligan <patjmulligan@protonmail.com>
Date: Sat, 1 Aug 2026 00:51:55 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] copy(deck): slide 7 shows just the entities + equity split
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Roles/responsibilities aren't solidified — drop them (and the overlap
note). Keep the 45/45/10 split bar and three clean entity cards
(name + %), plus the ask line.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
---
 src/deck/slides/PartnershipSlide.vue | 30 ++++++++--------------------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/deck/slides/PartnershipSlide.vue b/src/deck/slides/PartnershipSlide.vue
index 87cad2a..e796350 100644
--- a/src/deck/slides/PartnershipSlide.vue
+++ b/src/deck/slides/PartnershipSlide.vue
@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 <script setup lang="ts">
 import SlideFrame from '../components/SlideFrame.vue'
-import Icon from '../components/Icon.vue'
 import { partnership, fmtUsd } from '../data'
 
 const barBg: Record<string, string> = {
@@ -25,9 +24,9 @@ const pct = (e: number) => Math.round(e * 100)
   <SlideFrame
     kicker="Ownership"
     title="A three-way partnership"
-    subtitle="SolLunar Society is a joint venture. Investors buy in alongside the two operating partners."
+    subtitle="SolLunar Society is a joint venture — investors buy in alongside the two founding partners."
   >
-    <!-- equity bar -->
+    <!-- equity split bar -->
     <div class="flex h-5 w-full overflow-hidden rounded-full">
       <div
         v-for="p in partnership.partners"
@@ -40,33 +39,20 @@ const pct = (e: number) => Math.round(e * 100)
       </div>
     </div>
 
-    <div class="mt-6 grid gap-4 md:grid-cols-3">
+    <!-- the three entities -->
+    <div class="mt-8 grid gap-5 sm:grid-cols-3">
       <div
         v-for="p in partnership.partners"
         :key="p.name"
-        class="flex flex-col rounded-2xl border p-5"
+        class="flex flex-col items-center rounded-2xl border px-6 py-8 text-center"
         :class="ring[p.accent]"
       >
-        <div class="flex items-baseline justify-between gap-2">
-          <h3 class="font-display text-lg font-semibold text-fg">{{ p.name }}</h3>
-          <span class="font-display text-2xl font-bold" :class="text[p.accent]">{{ pct(p.equity) }}%</span>
-        </div>
-        <p class="text-xs uppercase tracking-wider" :class="text[p.accent]">{{ p.role }}</p>
-
-        <ul class="mt-4 flex-1 space-y-1.5">
-          <li v-for="r in p.responsibilities" :key="r" class="flex items-start gap-2 text-sm text-fg-muted">
-            <Icon name="Check" class="mt-0.5 size-3.5 shrink-0" :class="text[p.accent]" />
-            {{ r }}
-          </li>
-        </ul>
-
-        <p v-if="p.note" class="mt-3 border-t border-line pt-3 text-[11px] leading-relaxed text-fg-muted">
-          {{ p.note }}
-        </p>
+        <span class="font-display text-5xl font-bold" :class="text[p.accent]">{{ pct(p.equity) }}%</span>
+        <h3 class="mt-3 font-display text-lg font-semibold text-fg">{{ p.name }}</h3>
       </div>
     </div>
 
-    <div class="mt-5 flex flex-wrap items-center justify-center gap-x-6 gap-y-1 text-sm text-fg-muted">
+    <div class="mt-8 flex flex-wrap items-center justify-center gap-x-6 gap-y-1 text-sm text-fg-muted">
       <span>The ask:</span>
       <span class="font-display text-lg font-semibold text-fg">
         {{ fmtUsd(partnership.raiseAmount) }} for {{ pct(partnership.equityOffered) }}%